Pictures of what you've done would help. I think what you describe would work, but it isn't how I would do it.
At wing mounted solenoid, from the same terminal that has the battery connection take a cable to the main terminal on the pre-engaged starter. This needs to be a cable of the same size as the battery cable and will provide a permanent battery connection to the starter as it would have in its original application.
Then take a cable from the other large terminal on the wing mounted solenoid to the large spade terminal on the pre-engaged starter solenoid. This needs to be at least a 2mm2 cable and will then provide a voltage to the solenoid when you turn the key.
Does the engine turn over on the key OK if you remove the plugs?
Personally I think this is a lack of battery power or poor earth.
Hi Graeme,
I'll shoot down to the garage tomorrow and get a couple of pictures.
Thanks,
Matt